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for Across the lines

by Leni

person josh
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!

update soon please

you have a really good story forming here and i would love to see what you have instore!

looking forward to your update =)
person brayzen
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soo good, your ability to capture the characters is astonishing. (are you secretly a script writer out for jollies):) please continue..i want no I NEED to know what happens!!!!
person kourya
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chapter and I think it's pretty good, so I hope you continue with more chapters! I have yet to read the next 2, so I hope they're just as interesting. You do really well with characterization and body language, so it's easy to picture. Nice job.

~ Nakourya
person Drew
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeease, next chapter!
person Bethany
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi-
That was such an awesome story! Please update soon!!
person SinstralPride
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't even watch Grey's Anatomy and i love this story! I must have MORE!!! Please? i'll check back! It's great that you didn't just jump right to the steamier stuff, I really enjoy the lead up and introduction to what is going on... not that PWP doesn't have it's high points! I like where you're going with this, humanizing the characters and giving them motivation. Great job, keep it up!
person Richese
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great History!!! Give us more
person A fan
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Write more
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. I love the story so far, please update soon!
person jayjay
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG yes. they need to have sex now