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loved it.

I looooved it!
I have a strong love for Dean, he is much too nice and cute and sexy and funny for his own good XD
Tristan.. I just can't help myself with him, he's a jackass, but I still love him :P. Damn his looks XD
But this was just great! I realize that in this section people rarely get alot of reviews, so I thought I'd give you one, you really deserve them!
You write really great, thank you so so much for this fic ^^

Nice ending! You are a realy good writer! Hope you write an other story!

And thank you very much for sharing this story with us, my dear :-) !

It's been a great pleasure reading this fine and well-written piece of work about two young gods like Tristan / Chad and Dean / Jared in a not-always-so-smooth-but-hot-as-hell relationship, and I will look out for other stories of yours as i'm sure that you've got more goodies stashed somewhere.

My gratitude for the entertainment (and for pairing these two up... *growles*... damn, that last scene was hot... *growls again*), and until next time.

So cute, I loved it.

This story is awesome. I never thought I would believe a Tristan/Dean pairing, but this is good. I love it.
Can't wait to see the next chapter.
:-)

Damn this site! I've just written a great review but it suddenly disappeared... Okay, let's try again...

This story is amazing. I know stories with plot take way longer to get to the sex part, but I think at least this one is worth it! And besides, it doesn't have to be that long... like 'Rich Boys', it was a short story, it had a great plot and it had some sex. Now, hopefully this story will have much more.

Really, I can't wait to read next chap... I hope it lives up to my expectations now that Dean wants to reward Tristan. And wow, I really didn't expect that from Tristan. It seems he cares much more than he shows - and much more than I expected too.

You are truly gifted. I've read some of your OTH stuff and they're really good too, but this one is still my fav. Well, I hope you update soon, and could you please make the chaps longer? I can't seem to get enough of this story. =)

LOL!!! I had so much fun reading this chapter!! There was just so much healthy, good-natured humour (even in a typical "Gilmore Girls" way at that) in this, I constantly burst into fits of laughter *is still chuckling*

How about these:

“It’s late, honey.” She points out, looking suspiciously at each boy in turn. “Tell your friend you’ll see him tomorrow.” The evidence is right there on her face. She’s as embarrassed as them.

“Yeah, Dean.” Tristian smirks. “Tell me you’ll see me tomorrow.” LOL!! So something Tristian would say in this kind of situtions, never fully loosing his cocky side.


“This is an emergency!” Tristian complains. “I have to apologise now.”

“It can’t wait until Monday?” Rory frowns, looking at Dean for an explanation,

“Apparently not.” Tristian mutters. “Look, Dean’s coming over and I need to apologise before he gets here, so…give me the number!” BWAAAHAHAHAAA!!! So funny how desperate the guy is! ROTFL!

“If you knew why he was doing it, you wouldn’t think it was that adorable, trust me.” Dean tells her, taking a sip of coffee.

“Oooh!” Rory exclaims, grinning. “I see.”

“What?” Lorelai asks, sitting down beside them having forced Luke to give up his quest. “What I miss?”

“Dean’s boyfriend is well and truly under the thumb.” Rory giggles. LOL LOL once again!! Again, this is just so typically "Gilmore Girls" in the way the lines are being said. Love it!

And next to this healthy humour you've put a nice dose of dramatic romance, and a little bit of suspense (with Tristian's dad) into the mix as well. More than enough to make me want to read more / come back for more tasty titbits.

Thanks a lot for the speedy update! And until next time.

Am so happy they're together again, yeay Dean and Tristan. Love them. Can't wait for your next chapter

Hey! Nice story with very good ideas!