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for Best Friends or Lovers?

by shortielikemine

person Anon
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eww
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
god i loved it!! so fucking hot!!!
person UchihaXBloodXBoils
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, lol, the only way I could enjoy that show would be is this fic was a reality.
I only have one Problem with it: You seem to refer to them sticking things in each others clit's.. That is impossible, the clitoris would tear. There is a difference between a clit and a vagina.
person Allie
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So hot! Made me so wet.
but fyi, your clit& our pussy are differnt.
clit is infront of the vagina and is just like a little fold of skin.
& it feels great when you rub it. but you cant stick things in it.
but good job.
i hope you continue it.
person uhm
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so...they go from not even knowing if she reciprocates her feelings all the way up to just handing out slutty outfits and having sex within a couple of minutes? Ok then I guess my tip is this: stretch the story-arch alot more the next time.
person Gumballs
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jigger me daiseys
person Gumballs
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thats good BTW
person Mr. Q (again)
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
even better the 2nd time! i agree with Anon you should wright more! "ALL RIGHT giggity giggity GOO!"
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot
person RonMan
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Felt like I was hiding in the closet watching :) Good story