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for If I Had Only Known

by vinsmouse

person Luke
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, well, maybe all them things David is thinking is starting to rub off on Bo.... I love that one, Hazzard has it atractions, Oh that was hillairous. Sure does, thought there are more than one, the two slightly shorter and darker ain't half bad either one of them, as oily as the one tends to get.

It was sure one heck of a great chapter. I remember how it went with Bo there, when it's never turned out too good, and then you find out that you can do it. It's a great feeling.

Take care now, hugs, Luke
person Elenhin
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what, Luke can be about as overprotective of Bo as they both are over Daisy. I wonder if she ever realized that when she bites their heads off for it. They make some really cute couples though. And while I hate to say it, Luke needs to learn to let Bo go to cut back and relax on his own. He can find all the trouble he needs, that is for sure, but he can do some good to.

Reckon it's kinda hard for Luke though, that is both natural instinct and Marine training both telling him to do the same thing. He's bound to get cnonfused about it.

Great chatper, take care now, hugs, Luke
person Elenhin
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, now to see if you IM me or let me rview in peace... ;)

Well, I still say he aint no redneck, do he even have a CB in that car? Good thing for him he ran into Bo, and yeah, a few beers while working would be what he would want for it if anythign, Something nice while working. I'd say they could have a real nice time with a car and some beer, but I reckon they'll have a nice time in another way. Good for Bo he had an explanation when he got back. Funny Luke going to taht many assumptions, while he might, makes me think he was annoyed at something, maybe Jesse didn't let him go along.

Okay, review now placed, and You keep IM'ing me, so thats it for now, hugs Luke
person Lisa
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another new story,love it already,don`t know how you manage to write all these brill stories!love David already!