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for Love Betrayed

by vinsmouse

person Luke
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the thing didn't let me review at first, and now its some since and Im tired, but it was a great chapter, and my only complaints is that it ended. Im really glad hat Bo forgave Luke though, that boy is beating himself up pretty bad for it. It was a real sweet ending.

take care now, hugs; JOhn
person John
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, would try to make a great review, but I'm a bit to tired. was a great chapter though, with plenty of greatendess. Hmm, Luke getting classicall 'crowd talking' movie acting. Wonder if that really works. Not surprised Ledbetter was talking, when ain't he?

Gonna be intersting there, and I'd take a crankshaft to that fella if ya let me into his cel......

Hugs; John
person John
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See what you mean about the cliff hanger, hey, if we take Cliff, and take him to a cliff, we could have us a real dandy Cliff hanger....... ;)Shouldn't be no problem getting that fella now, if he survives Luke, and that might be kinda tricky.

It was a real good chapter, real good. Take care now, *hugs*
person jj
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!
But your just plain evil. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Please post soon real soon.
person John
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKay, now what did you do that for, its all going so nice, and then the chapter ends, that really aint fair you know, I wanted to keeep on reading, what kind of Uncle does that, end the chapter before I wanna stop readining, huh? Wait till I tell Uncle Jesse..........

Great chapter, fat marshemloow, wont hurt him much........ Go ahead Luke, put him on a stick and hold him over the fire some, ought to be fun.

It was a real good chapter, a litte of it seems headed in the right direction, the rest seems like some people could use a map. And someone ouught to install a vent on Luke, funny how they say Bo has the hotest temper, he might, But Luke is more devestating.

Take care now, huge hugs
person John
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsome chapter, like the way Cooter talked wtih Bo, he really knew what he was doing, and wanted to help them, though I wonder how he will be with Luke. I think he's right though, Bo want to get it back, but it won't be easy, and Luke's gonna have to work for it, though I know he'd never do anything to hurt him on purpose.

Great chater, hugs,
person jj
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! I hope bo and luke can work this out.
At times you just want to wrap your arms around them and
hold them. Then you justwant to beat there heads together.
person John
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter in it's own way. Feel as much sorry for Bo and Luke, that boy really don't know how to work out any problems, and Bo can't handle any mistakes, and that was a big one. In a certain way understandable, but still a big one.

Poor Luke, all hung over and sleepwalking, Well, you know, if anyone can work up to regain that trust, it will be him......

Hugs, John
person jj
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I think you did a great job on this chapter, bit please don't make us wait so long.
person Luke
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsome chapter, lotsa stuff going on, an' that angsty, don't think Luke is going to be sleeping much better than Bo would in there, he's suffering to. Feel sorry for both boys, can understand that is pretty tricky, but hey, you pulled off Uncle Jesse remeber, you're doing great.

hugs, Luke