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by vinsmouse

person tomboy17
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am sorry to tell you this but i cant find Do The Right Thing that u wrote so please can you contact me or tell me what happen cause i want to read it , i realy would appreciate if you gave it time , thank you .
person john
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now thats not fair, you told me you had put up a new chapter, you didn't say that it was the last one, now what am I suposed to read. Great chapter though, Bo is a heck of a forgiving little lad, and we love him for it. The trial was written mighty good. Man, that is an awfull feeling to go there and testify, but it seemed to shake up Jesse enough to see sense, good thing to, or he'd have lost all three kids.

Was really well done, what are you writing now? *puppy eyes* *hugs* John
person John
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, lots of tension, in a way, and stuff happenig, in many wasys. Mean nurse, let Luke yell at her ;) It was good, and seems Jesse did get tot hinking, I like the way everything played out, and the Harrison guy is prettty good. Well, with mean, nurses you need nice agents.

Take care now, *hugs* John R
person John
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the chapter, but it can be scary to know what I think.......

wow, the people was smart, are you sure they's real feds? Actually aware of the cars. Loved that whole deal, that is Luke for you, ordering the feds around. He'd do it, anytime he got the chance.

GERONIMO, there is a certain movie reason why I love that keyword.....

YAYYYYYY they got Bo, thats real great, they's gonna take care off him, it was a real neat protral of it all there, really neat. exciting to read. Iteresting cliff hanger to, now, what news was that praytell...... hmmmm....

Given that it's uncle Mouse writing.........

Take care now, it was great, *hugs* John
person John
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, last time I checked Jud was an evil spirit thingy that had to be salted and torched for not liking Bo with Luke, this might turn interesting.......

Great to have one where Jud is involved, and in a good way. Loved Luke taking Jesse to jail, and Bill Kane, this is gonna be real neat, talk about that boy beeing smart..

*hugs*
person John
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW; that was pretty strong you know. Jesse is gonna have a mess of problems when Luke finds out, and Cooter, and so is that place when them two come barreling in there........
person John
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, such a lot of sad stuff. Can even feel sorry for Jesse, he's just doing the best he knows. Sure isn't a happy family right now, Luke is gonna be completely miserable without Bo around.

Greta chapter
person John
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gee, that's a way you never thought Jesse would be acting. It's pretty weird, especially him taking it out on Cooter, that's not like the Jesse we know, but I supose even he has the riht to do a wrong. It's just to bad that the wrongs the ones we loves does are the worst ones.

Great chapter,

Hugs, John
person Lisa
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It`s sad that Jesse`s acting that way!can`t wait for the next part!
person John
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not sure I like the idea of Jesse follwing Bo right now, where is Luke when you need him? Jesse sure is messed up, but I doubt hed be that way if he saw it form the other point of view..Really good though

Hugs,