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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a good Bobby x Alex story! ^_^ Very nice... I hope you will write more.
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For a first fic, that was excellent!
Sexy, yet in the context of their close relationship, both the personal and the professional. A much more satisfying read than mindless bonking, no matter how technically well written.
The only thing I would ask is that you write each person's dialogue on a separate line. It makes things much easier to understand.
Sexy, yet in the context of their close relationship, both the personal and the professional. A much more satisfying read than mindless bonking, no matter how technically well written.
The only thing I would ask is that you write each person's dialogue on a separate line. It makes things much easier to understand.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um. it was good, but why was the girl dominate? i would have liked to see Goren take a more aggressive role
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why hasn't anyone reviewed this wonderful Bobby&Alex story yet? This is as good as a 'first time' encounter can get. You wrote with such warmth and tenderness regarding both Alex and Bobby's feelings towards each other. The finale was so very sweet and very sexy indeed!
Please don't let the lack of reviews keep you from writing more stories; you show promise as a writer and you should nurture that talent at every opportunity.
Try to post more as you wish, but there is another site called Amorous Intent, which is all Law & Order: C.I. erotica. Try looking over there at amorousintent.net The best lessons on writing and posting stories is here no doubt, so please give yourself the chance to write more.
Please don't let the lack of reviews keep you from writing more stories; you show promise as a writer and you should nurture that talent at every opportunity.
Try to post more as you wish, but there is another site called Amorous Intent, which is all Law & Order: C.I. erotica. Try looking over there at amorousintent.net The best lessons on writing and posting stories is here no doubt, so please give yourself the chance to write more.