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for Heat

by PaigeHaley

person Miasen
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and simple. I loved it!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
person Iarejedi
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was very good. Thank you for the great read. Keep up the great work. :D
person Canis
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's beautiful. Really, really, beautiful.
person Dr. Tomoe
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it..I especially like the way you used your words to elaborate the surroundings it makes the story seem much more better and more intriguing...Excellent job !
person Starflow
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I enjoyed that, it was a very nice scene altogether... Your style is lovely. And I really liked the fact that you didn't drag this out but just let it be a sweet oneshot; it works well like that. Thanks for sharing your story.~
person sticky
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sweet... More!