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Wow. I'm glad you updated this story, the best MF fic I've read both on this site and FF.net. Hope you can finish it.

::mouth drops.:: I am so glad I came to browse around the site. Damn.....Just.....Damn....@___@ ::Disappears for a few minutes...then returns.:: Damn....Okay...That is so much better! I am so glad you changed the last chapter....now the 6 chapter((Aka...the road to hell is praved with Good Interations Chapter)). I don't really agree about Leanbow being a pure soul. Some of his actions in MF are still a little iffy to me. But each his...or she own. Evil Chip is hot. >.> XD Even I know that isn't going to turn well for Chip. Still...Evil Chip is hot. XD Anyway, great work!

I had to reread this chapter twice...and I am sad to say it brought out of the same reaction. Disappointment. Evil Chip was hot...but...::sighs.:: The Tribual of Magic scene made me go 0__o. It become basicly become blame Chip for everything. And Yet, Nick..Xander...got off scotch free for their actions. ::Sighs.:: I truly enjoyed your story...I really did. But the last chapter ruin it for me.

Anyway, Congs on finish your story and I hope to read more stuff from you in the future.

I have been waiting for this for all this time and that's the ending? I honestly do not get it and it was not what I expected. This was a great story but the ending was a total let down.

::Mouth complete drops.:: Wow...just wow....I almost want to cry...Poor Chip. Poor Chip. Vida get into kinky much? Sorry...random through of the day. Just wow. This story is great. Please...Please...update soon if all possible. You left us with a mean cliffhanger. But I have a feeling that Chip has something under his sleeve. There has to be a plan Z some where under his cape. Anyway, keep up the good work.

LadyZ

OMG! OMG!
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You have blown me away again. I hope you write more soon! I need more of this I'm so addicted to this story! You're amazing! You've captured them all so well and I loved how you captured Vida and her obvious lust for violence. Please, please continue this soon!

This story is amazing. When I first took an interest in MF I read this and then I took my time and reread it today and I'm simply blown away, you are an excellent writer and I do hope you write more. ((Though my pairings are Chip/Vida, Daggeron/Madison I truly loved this!)) Write more verrrrrrry soon ^_^
-DJ Rocca

Excellent chapter. I knew Chip would be put aside his fear to help Nick. Now, what is phrase two? I am quite curious on what it is. Anyway, update soon, okay?

FYI: I think everyone in the group in natural magic users. Undonna said something about in Broken Spell. Nick is more powerful because his parents.

Hmm...This story keeps getting interesting. Necolari has control over Chip...but wasn't she in Nick's body at the time. So, it is techinal...maybe because I have no clue what you have planned. I cannot wait to see what big trouble you have planned. Keep up the good work. I cannot wait until your next chapter.

Another good chapter. More soon.