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for Fraternal

by rerickson1983

person Elisha Hilker
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update again really soon!!!This story is amazing!!!
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story. It was entertaining, and Id like to read more...
person clownboi
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story on this website! is there more i need the reat dont leave me hanging! i have read all the chapters of playing for keeps and fraternal! there amazing is there more??
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story so far. I remember reading some of "Playing for Keeps" at a different website but it was moved and apparently several of the stories there were lost, including that one. I don't suppose you have it archived somewhere else as I would love to finish reading it even if I already kind of know what happened in it - at least to Dan -.
Also I can kind of help you set up a website if you already have a server in mind (I've set up one for a friend one geocities a year or so ago). Not sure how good I am but I am willing to try to help out if you want. Can give you a link to her site...not that there is much there, did the first page and then she decided to put off setting the rest of it up.
Anyway keep up with this, looking eagerly forward to the next bit.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude! Cliffhangers are officially of the bad! I can't wait to find out what happens next, I am well and truely hooked. Great chapter! Bring on the next one! :oD
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I may be a little bias here but I love this story. As for Anonymous who didn't like the story but kept reading anyway, I think you have secret issues. Well said to the person who defended. It's only ficiton. I proudly pass the Playing For Keeps Torch to you Ryan. Run Forest Run.
person Lissie
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT

that was GREAT

I loved everything about it

will there be more?

person Hidden Obsessions
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great sequel to Playing For Keeps, which I followed and still follow very closely!!!

The dialogues are funny and the sex scenes are hot!!!

Give us more!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ahtilat
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, can't wait to read more. Especially when the boys find out their magic has created another problem for them to deal with. I can't find your other story though here on the site. I would love to read that as well.
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, loved the talk between Nathan/Dean. Please update soon.