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for With Spit and a Prayer

by Refur

person Starflow
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my god. That was so incredibly distressing. The angst is so gripping - you're one of the very few who know how to write good, fatally painful angst, and believe me I have the authority to declare that. Damn. I think I'm just gonna sit here for another five minutes staring at the screen after I'm done reviewing... I feel out of breath. I've been waiting for this kind of development - wondering when Sam would figure out just what this has been doing to /Dean/ - and now that it's happening, I'm just speechless. Well done, well done. Please keep this story up. It's my favourite Supernatural fic here at the moment.
person Angel Jade
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a way to end it! Please, please, please let the next chapter be soon! I love what you're doing with this story, it's so addictive. I can't wait for more!
person Emilia
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, as was "Passenger." I was wondering when Sam would find out about Dean's feelings for him, and I finally got it! ^_^ Will Sam return his feelings? And anytime soon?
person Angel Jade
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I love this fic! Keep going, you're doing a fantastic job!
person Starflow
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... What can I say that I haven't said several times yet? Good lord, the angst, the angst. It's just positively killing me and I love it so much that I really should have my head examined. Honestly, there is nothing better than a story that has the potential to move you to the brink of depression. I thank you again for yet another distressing chapter. The last sentence just made me gulp - I have such a bad feeling about this. Please continue to amaze me.~
person Starflow
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. Dear author Refur, you have actually made my day. My head was really full of all kinds of real-life worries, so I decided to click myself to AFF, and then I saw that you had updated. Now, after reading that last, incredibly distressing chapter - it's all I can think about. It was simply amazing. The angst is totally making me want to cry. For which I have to applaud you. Stories don't impress me often, but yours certainly has. I love the style, it's strangely manic, and the story itself is just utterly angsty and gripping. I am hooked on the despair and happy to admit it.
person atana_blackfox
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love what you're doing with this story. The depth of emotion is well written, and the angst is well done and doen't feel contrived. Looking forward to seeing what you do with it.
person Starflow
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phew...reading that was really hard. Once again I must thank you for the experience. The angst just keeps getting stronger - and I love it, even though it blocks my breath and makes me feel like something was gripping my throat. Your style is quite original, which is a great thing. I hope you keep this wonderful piece of work up and I can come back for more later.
person BoMama
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh when is the next chapter going to be updated. i can't wait. love it.
person Starflow
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My apologies for taking a while to read & review.

This chapter was quite stunning. Stilling, I'd say. The angst is really strangling me, but I can't help loving this warped story. The way Sam is acting is intriguing and I have a bad feeling about this - Dean is being intense and it's all very ominous - and I can't wait to see more. Please do continue this fic. Thank you.