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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok this was awsome and i'm streight oooooh straighter than a bored and I really loved this story keep up the good work I loved the concept
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 6 : Fun to read.
The story is way choppy in spots, much smoother in others. It would have been interesting to read more about the joing of Neville with Sam and Teal'c. Were Sam and Teal'c together prior to Neville's arrival?
Obviously AU for SGC because Jack's clone died. Is HP also AU, other than just being a part of a cross over?
Rule bending aside, the SGC is primarily a military base. Even AU its really hard to believe that no one tried to quarantine the wizards, and even harder to believe they were allowed off base.
The best parts so far seem to be the Jack / Harry / Daniel parts, and the Anise bashing (mostly because I don't like her).
The story is way choppy in spots, much smoother in others. It would have been interesting to read more about the joing of Neville with Sam and Teal'c. Were Sam and Teal'c together prior to Neville's arrival?
Obviously AU for SGC because Jack's clone died. Is HP also AU, other than just being a part of a cross over?
Rule bending aside, the SGC is primarily a military base. Even AU its really hard to believe that no one tried to quarantine the wizards, and even harder to believe they were allowed off base.
The best parts so far seem to be the Jack / Harry / Daniel parts, and the Anise bashing (mostly because I don't like her).
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooow!!
This is really good.. ^^
More.
Soon.
Please.
Pleeeease..
^.~
*begs prettily on her knees and uses her feared superpower.. the almighty PUPPY-EYES OF DOOM*
=P
This is really good.. ^^
More.
Soon.
Please.
Pleeeease..
^.~
*begs prettily on her knees and uses her feared superpower.. the almighty PUPPY-EYES OF DOOM*
=P