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I loved this story so much. I really enjoy the Jayne and Kaylee storyline. This was a wonderful book. I could clearly picture the charectors. Great use of chinese, just like the show. Have to mention hot sexin scenes but, not overdone. Very good.

This was my first Jayne/Kaylee fic, and wow, it certainly won't be the last. I thoroughly enjoyed reading such a well written, well thought out, developed story that was told in a manner that matched the show's unique tone. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the future.

I love this pairing, this fic, and how LONG it is. I love a good long read. And this has, more than once, tugged hard at my hearstrings. Outstanding work! I cannot wait to read more.

Oh, yay! I love that there is a new chapter. But, sadness....we still have to wait? Cor...alright. Fine.

Did love this addition, by the way. The clueless disgruntled captain is priceless.

I just...this chapter started with something like me cringing and peeking through my mental fingers at it cuz I didn't want to see. Then, the end of the chapter left me all like awwwwwwww and fun! and once again, I just can't wait for the rest!

And thanks for popping by!

Right. Chapter seventeen. This is...heartbreaking...and yet brings hope. I am not looking forward to what Jayne has in store for Higgins. Also, I am totally looking forward to what Jayne has in store for Kaylee. Please, please post more soon. Else I will be forced to write another one-shot so you will post again. Kidding, kind of...I love this story. Thank you for selling the Jaylee so well. You've convinced me.

I've been reading the tale for a time now, and I have to say you are one of the writers that keeps me searching through fanfiction, since I know there ARE good works in it, that are worth trawling through the obligatory crap.

You write wonderfully, and it's enjoyble to see. My eyes were hurting through the alliance station bits with the Hands of Blue around... Really got me immersed.

I don't fancy Higgins chances, all told. The man ain't going to be at all coherant come the death... I hope Kaylee gets a go at him, it's only fair.

Oh, I would so love to see more of this. I have been holding off on reading it, satisfying myself with one-shots until after finals, and with those complete I sat and read all 16 lovely chapters last night. Went to bed and muddled it over, and am now perfectly happy to say I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!

...sorry. Kinda got away with myself there. I am typically not a Jaylee shipper, but I very much like the way you have it going. And I like your Jayne. Well done indeed.

Oh, and I can kinda see you and your little malicious grin, mentally rubbing your hands together with that little cliffy, you evil evil author you. Hee hee!

I love this story, can't wait for more

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