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for Ransom

by vinsmouse

person Elenhin
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finally made my way here, told ya I'd make it. Well, I can sure sympathize with Bo there, poor little sprout but it sure was good with his sight returning. I love that part where Jesse put his cap on him, an' I tell ya one thing. If Bo is half the sucker for wanting to be like 'daddy' that I am, then that made his day. I kept picturing Bo in Jesse's red hat for the whole rest of the chapter.

I like Luke's protectivness, one thing is for sure, if Bo ever comes home crying for something Rosco did, it won't be a father with a shotgun, it'll be a cousin.

Take care now, hugs,
person Lisa
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love a happy ending,just love Bo/Rosco!hope you`re gonna write more!
person Elenhin
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, how could I not like it, or I dont know, does love it mean don't like... You know, I think that Rosco is gonna have one hell of a scare when he finds out about Bo, and get thinking as well. If he pulls away from Bo so that no one can hurt him, then he will never know if someone else does, or like now. If he is with Bo, he can do more about it.

And you know what, its next year new, and I love this, more soon please Meldir nin.

Hugs, Luke
person Elenhin
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, just got home from the family, Merry Christmas. Told ya that already Rosco, don't hold nothing back for no time or you cant control it one bit. It just dont work that way. Poor Bo, I reckon he feels helpless in more than one way, becuase he is somewhat helpless fysically it seems people kinda go over his head about what should be done for him. Have to make him feel double helpless.

That poor lad is sure going through a hard time now, let me know if you have someone who can take a crankshaft for it, and take care now, Merry Christmas morning.

Big hug, Luke
person Elenhin
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I read it and I am o tired I'm not sure whatever I did or not, loved it though, it was great, you know, if oyu dont tell up front some dude will just crack it in a worse way...... Rosco should learn

it was really great,

hugs, Luke
person Vixey
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
although i dont see bo nor roscoe as being gay you write it very well. i supose anything is possible and if they were gay i could definatly see them as lovers. i am loving this story so far and i loved the prequal to this one. keep it up
person elenhin
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was cool, everyone is paying Bo's bill. Rosco is pretty good there and it has to be a tough time for him, though as I am sure you know I am mostly for Bo.

If any of the real bad guys comes around I'll keep my crankshaft ready.

Take care now, hugs, Elenhin
person Elenhin
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chapter. Poor Bo, that really make you ache for him the way he feels there at the end. Poor little boy. he should have stuck with Luke, then that would never be up. Rosco and Little was great, they can both work effectivly and together when they want to.

It was a great chapter and I am looking forward to the rest.

Hugs, Elenhin
person Elenhin
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, it was great, and Jesse is right, leaving Bo would accomplish absolutely nothing or less. It just dont work that way, but it for sure was a great chapter.

Hugs, Elenhin
person Elenhin
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, you know, I wanna know how he fired that shot.not that a bullet in the tank instantly blows antyhing, but the bullet is gonna be a lot nastier. Migt be whatahppened to Bo, it has all kind of sharp edges once it goes through metal. Aewsome chapter, and Rosco had a good reason letting them close the trunk, well, that part worked, but Bo now is gonna be really scared. On the other hand, they'd probably put him on a 24/7 safty sruvilliance so no one can make his family or anyone leave.

It was great, hugs, Elenhin