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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think you've hit House right on the head! the language written is perfect, and i can see it too! not only the dialogue but the general narration. very well done indeed! hug puppies...that had me going.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was HOT! Your writing is a combination of poetry and prose, so descriptive I could visualize everything. Great job!