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for The Ultimate Sacrifice

by angela9in

person craig
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this is funny and talented please update
person sabs
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzz continue your story its really interesting especially between michael n t bag i cant wait your story line is really awesome!!!
person Al
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!Amazing!Amazing!
person Lisa
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That´s a really nice story and Michael is so sweet.
person celestialkit
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so addicting. I was truly hoping for the next part of the story to be updated when I got on today and here it was. I look forward to reading it. I hope you update soon. Your writing feels like this could have happened in the series if Bellick were to make these steps. Great job on your story and hoping to read more.
person Jacky
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Normally I don´t review but this time I just coudn´t resist.
Wonderfull story.
Moooooooooooooore
person lindsey
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is fantastic,
I just can´t get enough of it.
person Lase
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more.
I want to read more of it.
person Lase
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much. Please update soon.
person Kathy
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much,
Please update soon.