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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Believable dialogue, well suited to the characters. Extremely hot.
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! Nice use of imagery, and the sex was hot without being cheesecake, which I like. Keep up the awesome work!
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
1. That disclaimer is far too hilarious. You should take it down at once to stop innocent viewers from choking on their lunches -cough cough cough-
2. I LOVE Stabler and Benson. Love them. And it was cool that you took a scene from the show and enhanced it. You're clearly a fan who knows what she's doing. Argh (reference 'pirate' in your name)
3. Overall, good. Sensual which is exactly how I always imagined they'd be.
2. I LOVE Stabler and Benson. Love them. And it was cool that you took a scene from the show and enhanced it. You're clearly a fan who knows what she's doing. Argh (reference 'pirate' in your name)
3. Overall, good. Sensual which is exactly how I always imagined they'd be.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well. holy jesus. if i wore glasses, they'd be steamed.
you know you're good at this.
you know you're good at this.
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great interlude... very nicely done.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say it was wonderful to read an Olivia/ Elliot story. There are very few of them. You write Elliot and Olivia so well and I love the roughness of Elliot. Sorry if I'm rambling, but I hope that you are able to write a sequel to this story where the two actually go to Elliots house. The idea of it is extremely interesting. Thanks for a great story!
Tasha
Tasha
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was good i liked it, i hope you add another chapter
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...wow.... normally, I'm really not a fan of pairings on shows, but 'Liv's and El's UST is blatant, and you just took that and ran with it in the best way ever. I never thought I would actually like a story about a pairing, especially one of my favorite shows. Wonderful piece! This is going in my bookmarks!
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written and in-character. I loved it.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sequel, sequel, please! This was great! :D I would've liked them to have their first time in a bed, but eh, I guess they can improvise, heh.