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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the last two lines lol seems like how they'd end an episode :P The story was really really good, one of my friends has been beggin me to read it so and did and i'm so glad i did!!! good on ya! :D
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't really have a problem with the last two lines. They fit fine enough. I did notice you had blatant disregard for Greg's leg. But who cares when the story is this hot. It was great. It reminded me of the Entertainment Weekly cover with Hugh Laurie putting on the rubber glove. I'm now filled with hundreds of dirty House thoughts. Thank you oh so very much. :)