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by angelsdee

person lost1
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YOUU HAVE TO FINISH!!!!!!!!!!! I really like the story but where is the end?!? I like the way you juxtaposed the gentle and animal sides of Ronon. I feel like you should have addressed Ronon's jealousy/Elizabeth's possible misconceptions of being his mate before Ronon went away and got shot. Perhaps that issue is key to future elements. I will have to read the end and find out! ;-)
Elendilsheart
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first of all, I have to tell you that this story is not only beautiful but special. It is about the redemption of two souls with one another. It simply took my breath away and I truly do hope you continue writing it. The way they love one another, so earnestly and honestly, is how true love should be. Ronon is deliciously primal and Weir is turning out to be quite the sultry lover. ;) I can only hope there will be many more chapters! ^^ Please don't let Ronon die, I don't think Elizabeth's heart could take it. I think next chapter they'll both gain a new respect and understanding for each other's positions. I hope you udate soon as I am dying to find out what happens next! ^^ Add me to your update list if you have one please.
person BelovedOne
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is absolutely *amazing*! I am admittedly a hard-core Sparky shipper, but I've got a soft spot for the Elizabeth/Ronon 'ship, as well, as this story drew me in and wouldn't let me go.
I am anxious to find out what happens next, and to find out who is behind all of this.
Please update soon!
~BelovedOne
person Seawana
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so happy you update that was excellent. Keep up the good work and I'll keep an eye out.
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more!

no, really...

more!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, seriously now.

MORE!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um, what I mean is,


please more?!!!!!!
person Sea
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like please continue.