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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautifully written and tasteful piece of fan fiction artistry, you captured their characters perfectly, this is by far one of my favourite stories on this site, i adored it! Thank you for writing such a spectacular story.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 3 : Intriguing. I would very much like to see where you go with this. The Dr. and diapers. I always had the feeling Susan didn't come into his life until well after the diaper stage, so its kinda hard to picture.
There are some grammer errors and typos which are somewhat distracting. The first chapter is very choppy, but it smooths out a bit in the next two.
There are some grammer errors and typos which are somewhat distracting. The first chapter is very choppy, but it smooths out a bit in the next two.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please you must update. I cant get enough of this story
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They there. Just stopped by to give you a frendly review. I like your story and hope you write more. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter