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by Lyra

person Skitty
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this fic and thought you had a good handle on the characters as they spoke to each other. I'm compiling a notebook of adult fiction from Buffy, Angel, and Firefly to give as a prize at the Whedon Track for Dragon*Con this year. Would it be alright if I put this piece in there, with full credit to you of course?
person Kallisto
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful and in character. I really,really enjoyed this, and I'm very picky when it comes to fanfictions :)

Very beautiful at the same time as being sexy.... very sexy at the same time as being realistic.

Cold yet warm.

You really know what you're doing and I, as a reader, appreciate that ;)
Kudos, Kallisto
person NightSiren
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You got the feel of the show PERFECTLY! Their interaction, especially all the dialogue, was perfect. I felt like Mal would really say those things. And the Red. Great description. And it was really tasteful. Excellent job!