rate_review Reviews

RE: chapter one

Interesting first chapter... very mysterious... I wonder if the lady assasin is someone that they (the Doctor and Rose) know.

Umm, a bit of a suggestion... you ought to put a line of space between the different paragraphs. It would make it easier on your readers' eyes.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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RE: chapter two

Great character interaction, development, personality, and dialog too.

I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--some errors found needing correcion:

"tardis" ought to be in all caps, like so "TARDIS", as it is an abbreviation. This was found throughout the chapter.

"downing street" the first letters ought to be capitalized as it is a proper noun, like so "Downing Street".

And just a reminder, you ought to put a line of space between the different paragraphs. It would make it easier on your readers' eyes.
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