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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! please continue
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all, kudos for the most recent chapter title. The Wallflowers pretty much own the universe. :D
I really hope you haven't abandoned this story. I really like the way you've developed the characters, even while keeping true to the show in their personality traits. And I'm really enjoying how you bring their father into it; how everything is screwed up just under the surface.
Anyway! Enough of my ramblings. ^_^;; Very good job thus far, and I really hope you update this soon!
~Cat
I really hope you haven't abandoned this story. I really like the way you've developed the characters, even while keeping true to the show in their personality traits. And I'm really enjoying how you bring their father into it; how everything is screwed up just under the surface.
Anyway! Enough of my ramblings. ^_^;; Very good job thus far, and I really hope you update this soon!
~Cat
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good gracious! I hope there is more soon cause you can't leave us readers hanging like that for long! Great job so far and I look forward to reading more soon! ~Lila
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is great! Looking forward to the update.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By God, yes, you ARE utterly cruel, my dearest... ending it right there, to leave us hanging in thin air until the next chapter is posted... Argh, hmmmmpppphhhh, unnnnggghhhh,... *is passing out*.
Very well done on angsty Dean once again (loved the part about how he resented his father for the life he had been given by him!), and you had me completely hooked with Dean's search for the poltergeist in the house. I could see that spooky scene right in front of me, as if it were really there. That's how good this chapter was.
Please, don't leave us hanging for too long. I see that the date on which I read chapter 9, is november 24th 2006... Hopefully the date on which I'll be reading chapter 11 won't be Februari 28th...
I know that stories don't write themselves, but pleeeeaaaaase, pretty please, *puppy dog eyes*... write more.
My congratulations and my thanks for this great piece of entertainment!
Very well done on angsty Dean once again (loved the part about how he resented his father for the life he had been given by him!), and you had me completely hooked with Dean's search for the poltergeist in the house. I could see that spooky scene right in front of me, as if it were really there. That's how good this chapter was.
Please, don't leave us hanging for too long. I see that the date on which I read chapter 9, is november 24th 2006... Hopefully the date on which I'll be reading chapter 11 won't be Februari 28th...
I know that stories don't write themselves, but pleeeeaaaaase, pretty please, *puppy dog eyes*... write more.
My congratulations and my thanks for this great piece of entertainment!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* c'mon, that's just mean, leaving it there. :-( Love this story though!!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Although, in chapter four you said that Sam was two months old when Dean pulled him out of their burning house. Sam was six months old. As minor a detail this may seem, the fact that Sam was six months at the time old is actually an important factor in the show. Otherwise I would not have mentioned it. Just thought you might like to know.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You haven't updated in sooo long! Hope you find the time to soon. I really like this story! So angsty!
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this fic is really good! Waiting for the next chapter, drooling already~
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Would you believe that your story is one of the best angsty Wincest-stories I have EVER read out there on the Internet???
It's your first try at angst you say? Well, I can assure you that you're very damn good at it! The whole atmosphere you have managed to create around the two brothers, the detailed insight into their train of thought, the equally detailed charactarization, the very well-taken care of language,... it's all tremendously engrossing and I am just dying to read more!
So please, I beg of you, before I actually die, post a few updates if you can? It will be greatly appreciated, and the sequals to this story shall be greedily devoured with uninhibited / unrestrained / uncontroled hunger and desire...
I thank you in advance for an update, and I also thank you very much for writing!
*goes back to swooning over the hotness and almost unbearable-to-look-at beauty of Sam and Dean / Jared and Jensen*
It's your first try at angst you say? Well, I can assure you that you're very damn good at it! The whole atmosphere you have managed to create around the two brothers, the detailed insight into their train of thought, the equally detailed charactarization, the very well-taken care of language,... it's all tremendously engrossing and I am just dying to read more!
So please, I beg of you, before I actually die, post a few updates if you can? It will be greatly appreciated, and the sequals to this story shall be greedily devoured with uninhibited / unrestrained / uncontroled hunger and desire...
I thank you in advance for an update, and I also thank you very much for writing!
*goes back to swooning over the hotness and almost unbearable-to-look-at beauty of Sam and Dean / Jared and Jensen*