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for First Tumble

by shelia452

person Scribe
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. Steamy and yet poetic in the visuals. Kudos to you hun. This is what good erotica is meant to look like.

person Anon
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was short
person CHLARK_LOVER
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS HOTTTTTTT AND SWEET
person Mae
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want you to know before I get to the actual review that i have read many a smut story.

The review: HOLY FUCKING COW!!! that was the best smut I have ever read!!!
person midknight
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice imagery and well written,stylish... only wish there was a bit more about how they got there. Kepp on keeping on