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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I am looking forward to more of it. Please update soon.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to say, I really like this story and I read it in one setting. Some was a little when you repeated some of it, but it's great read. You do need a beta and it will clear all your mistakes up. And to one review who said it takes 3 to 4 weeks for a passport their wrong. In the uk if you need a passport right away, they will issue it in one day for a BIG FEE. I am work in the travel business and I can tell you stories on people who let the passport laspe. You make a appointment and its issue right thier.
So you were right on that one.
please update soon.
So you were right on that one.
please update soon.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and can not wait to read more. Harry will grow up with lots of love and afection. Will they get Padfoot out of prison any time soon? Like the next few years before Harry goes to school? Will they meet any other magical children in cascade? thank you for writing.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Please update soon.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great work thus far but could you add more please? I would really like to see whats going to happen with this.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished number 9/ chapter 10. Interesting idea and development. The presentation is choppy and abrupt, and the formating makes the story difficult to read. I will check back to see what happens.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I hope that you update soon.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Simon reacts to Harry, or how Blair's mom takes being a grandmother. The hippie chick should just *love* that.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~ British passports take 3-6 months to aquire, not one afternoon.
~shots have to be booked weeks in advance, and are not required for america
~there is no plaza holet in london; Hilton is one of the best there
~there is no need to repear the same scene almost word for word from a barely-changed PoV
~adopting a child from the UK into the states would not take under a week; Checks would need to be made on the family adopting, as well as dual or american citizanship for the child.
I originally liked the idea of your story, but it has been a dissapointment so far
~shots have to be booked weeks in advance, and are not required for america
~there is no plaza holet in london; Hilton is one of the best there
~there is no need to repear the same scene almost word for word from a barely-changed PoV
~adopting a child from the UK into the states would not take under a week; Checks would need to be made on the family adopting, as well as dual or american citizanship for the child.
I originally liked the idea of your story, but it has been a dissapointment so far
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait for Jim and Blair to meet Harry. Hope there is more soon.