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for The Love of War

by Saphirephoenix

person kehlan
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I started to read this story out of sheer boredom as I don't normally read Xena stuff, let alone alternate universe stuff but whatever led me to it, I am so glad I did start reading it. I have just finished the first chapter and can't wait to read the rest, this is extremely well written. I just laughed when the male at the beginning turned out to be the dog and not Jessie's lover! you have made us care about the character and the whole thing is very professional and very compelling. Thank you for sharing this story.
person purrfus
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished re-reading chapter 2. I noticed the story had been updated and forced myself to wait until I had time to re-read. Great idea, love the twisted universe - I haven't seen as many of these and this is the best written. The plot and character development flow almost as well as the conversation.

And I agree about the hair! Of course brunette is not always better - think Chronicle of Riddick - that was just weird, although I still liked it better than his Lord of the Rings look.
person purrfus
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 12. Oh My. Plot, characterization, and great sex too! There was a note where you referred to yourself as a first time author. Does that mean this is the first you have written or the first you have shared?
person Dvorchak
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know you are a lot like 'Schoolhouse Rock' entertaining and eductional....that's damn sneaky. I love the historical notes you occasionally have in the beginning of your chapters. And of course UPDATE SOON!!
person JB
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice! i <3 karl urban, and the bad boy image is very yummy!
person renee
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it its funny write more plz
person misha
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, just wanted to say how much i enjoy reading this fic, especially since your using the sovereignverse characters instead of the usual xena/herc ones. i can't wait until strife and jessie meet up and am definitely looking forward to when you hook cupid/jessie/strife up! please post more soon as reading the latest of your fic just makes my day ^__^
person purrfus
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Lots and Lots More.....PLEASE!
person Ailill
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I like how you get both POV's in the chapters without it being confusing..update asap :>
person renee
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it write more plz