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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers will keep me interested......so you uh gonna update soon?
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 16: Well at least you tease with style!
Great work with the sex, but even better with the relationship development between Cupid/Jesse, and Cupid/Strife. The family interaction was lovely.
Great work with the sex, but even better with the relationship development between Cupid/Jesse, and Cupid/Strife. The family interaction was lovely.
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch15: Came back to read this again. The story continues to fascinate me. Each time through I focus on something a little different. The sex is great, the developing relationships between Cupid / Strife and Cupid / Jess are wonderfully done. This time Jess's handling of the Dog of War, and Ares and the temple virgins were especially fun.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 15: This just gets better and better. The ploys within plots - surrounded by misdirection and manipulations - yummy.
If you really feel this one needs a lot more work, say another 30 or 40 chapters or so, we can wait as long as we need too.
If you really feel this one needs a lot more work, say another 30 or 40 chapters or so, we can wait as long as we need too.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How can you start such a good story and not finish it????
Well, I enjoyed what you've come up with so far. Please finish it if you get the chance.:)
:)
Well, I enjoyed what you've come up with so far. Please finish it if you get the chance.:)
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 14: Once more the last chapter. Darn it.
I hope the job goes well and leaves you lots of time and energy for writing. Admitedly a selfish wish but what the heck those can sometimes be the best kind.
I hope the job goes well and leaves you lots of time and energy for writing. Admitedly a selfish wish but what the heck those can sometimes be the best kind.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
re-read ch7: I keep coming back to this story. I admit to hoping for more, but re-reading it is a wonderful way to spend the afternoon.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 14 - When you say surprise you really mean it. Love the strategy. Get the boys in bed can be wonderful, and yours really is, but the plot and manipulation running through the scene is just yummy!
You do characterization, plot, anticipation / suspense (definitely some of my most favorite things), and your spelling and grammar are good too.
You do characterization, plot, anticipation / suspense (definitely some of my most favorite things), and your spelling and grammar are good too.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 13 - Yeah! More. This just gets better and better. I recently was watching a DVD of Ares God of Love, I know there were other characters but he was the one I was watching, and you really do get the essence of the characters so well. Kink can be good, yours is - and fun too!.
I hope the new job is going well and your muse cooperates. Thanks for deciding to share your writing.
I hope the new job is going well and your muse cooperates. Thanks for deciding to share your writing.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love Love LOVE this story. I hope you bring up the next one soon.