rate_review Reviews

Its been so long. Bad me. I was reading a Joxer story and remember this story, which brought so much joy and inspired so many wonderful things.

The story is still as amazing and entertaining as it was when I first read it - rare to find a story which more than stands the test of time. Thank you for sharing what you wrote and leaving it up.

 

I was just thinking about stories I used to read and remembered this one. I've read a lot of stories since this was first published but it still holds up as one of the best. Original mixture and very well written.

chapter 2: I have to admit I've wondered why she never imagined she was having a strange dream after a late night Xena marathon. But its kinda of like the mechanism of transport - as long as the rest of the story is entertaining and well written, which it is - some bit just aren't important.

chapter 3: The first few times I read this chapter, I focused on the sex because Hey - its really good sex - and if thats what Jessie's dreams are like its no wonder she didn't think about it being a dream when she ran into the courtyard.

This time I read and re-read the bath sequence. Bliss is so adorable.

Please come back to this story, it's soooooo good.

So, uh...where's chapter 19?

Wow. This was great. So hot. Gotta love Cupid God Of War. Yum! Great job.

I hope you continue this story soon. I love it! Sexy Karl in all that leather. YUM

ch 18. Thanks but I really wouldn't pout. I'm more the explosive temper tantrum type. Of course either of these responses only works if I know where to find you.... but only in a really supportive non-stalkerish type way.

Sorry for not reviewing earlier, because I've actually read this 3 times since you posted - I've just had problems with access and getting my password to go through.

Since I've admitted to reading the chapter 3 times, there's really no point in saying I didn't like it as reverse physchology. So - I really, really really liked it a lot.

You've done an excellent job of establishing and maintaining the individual character voices, which considering the limited amount of canon material, is amazing. I went back and re-watched the alternate episodes just to check and was blown away. After rewatching I could so see your story come to life.

At the same time, you've done a wonderful job of creating an original character who has enough background information provided to make her real in the context and hold her own with the other characters. The details of her life and personality have been presented in such a way they are interesting to read, and move the story forward.

And then there is the sex. Thats really good too!

Thanks for writing and sharing.

ch 17 : Love the way you do inspired. Can something be so hot a person could go blind from reading it? Maybe.

I wonder if Bliss will enjoy his new sibling.

I was just about to stop reading for the evening and turn off the computer, but at the last minute I decided to visit aff. The first thing I look for was this story. The reward for staying was incredible.

Thanks