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by elzano

schedule June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM

You've got a few typos a quick read-through would catch for you.

This was heartbreaking. This glimpse of a moment was truly a devastating scene to witness. You did very well describing their emotions, showing both of their shattering hearts.

Thank you for sharing this.

schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let that be the end! That was hot, and sad to see Sam standing there at the door... Please continue!
person Siarra
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness... There is simply something so very touching and heart wrenching about this story that it's almost haunting. The nearly tangible atmosphere throughout the piece is amazing, and the beautiful ending is just bittersweet. The characterization is captivating and will definitely appeal to anyone who has ever explored their own darker feelings in an exercise of masochism. This fic is a masterpiece of unspoken emotions, and while the actions are played out well, it's their impact that leaves the reader speechless.
person Miss Meehan
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very raunchy and gritty. I liked it a lot. So is this a one shot? Will issues be resolved between Dean and Sam?