AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for A Man of His Word

by Phantom69781

schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! i red this before but never commented!! I love this story and was hopping after "blood bath" that there was going to be a story of this! so glad you wrote this!
person whatweareafraidof
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like this story... there are so few tim and abby stories, and you wrote all of them so thank you
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THANKyou. Finally, a readable Abby/McGee fic. It was in character, unbelievably sweet and well written. Not to mention, totally orgasmic. Thanks =D
person Bluestone
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic fic, and as a matter of fact, I've read this one before, but after watching NCIS' Halloween special, I had to read it again. Especially the part about Abby's "Munroe" costume, and how it had McGee's eyes literally glued to her the entire time. Though Dinozo (or however you spell his name) was there, it didn't matter to me, it was the playful way McGee and Abby acted to one another that got my attention. Especially her reaction to the cheerleader date McGee had met due to same interests in on-line gaming and the fact they were going to a Halloween party they were to go on.

I don't know why, but if there is to be a continuation to this story you wrote, then it'd be perfect to start at this point in the show. Especially if it has Abby showing McGee just how displeased she was about him having another girl for a Halloween date. With her still dressed in her Marylin Munroe costume, just to get McGee to become putty in her hands before she has him in her "ropes", pardon the pun. What do you think?
person Probie
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This "deserves" a sequal, continue describing the weekend spent together by these two, and do answer this one question... Does Abby get to tie McGee up before Monday comes? Or at the very least, some kind of "payback" for being trapped at his mercy? You've gotta continue this, it truly does deserve a continuation, even if its just one more chapter.