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October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was very well done.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet, but who`s the gal?
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG. So hot.
*ahem*
And very well-written. In character as well as OMG hot. (This pairing is so quick to reduce me to netspeak.) I loved how you wrote it from Ronon's point of view. I'd only make one nitpick, and that is the use of the phrases "straining rod" and "moist flesh." Few euphemisms can pull me out a story quicker. (Well, okay, a lot more can, but few of them are found in a story this good.) On the whole, though, this was great.
*ahem*
And very well-written. In character as well as OMG hot. (This pairing is so quick to reduce me to netspeak.) I loved how you wrote it from Ronon's point of view. I'd only make one nitpick, and that is the use of the phrases "straining rod" and "moist flesh." Few euphemisms can pull me out a story quicker. (Well, okay, a lot more can, but few of them are found in a story this good.) On the whole, though, this was great.