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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. It's a fairly light BDSM theme, you seem to focus on the Dom/Sub part. Personally I've never been much of a fan of the J/C pairing, but that's not your fault, it's just an opinion. I appreciate you writing a couple of stories that are connected and I look forward to reading the last part.
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well...you know how much I loved the first one...
This isn't bad, you stayed a bit to close to "Resolutions" for my taste, and got a little mushy. Heh. Luckily that's personal stuff. The sex was hot (I just don't like submissive Jay anywhere near as much as dominant). The only real "problem" is that you have a few grammatical errors, which I'd be down to help with if you need it.
Keep up the good work. :3
This isn't bad, you stayed a bit to close to "Resolutions" for my taste, and got a little mushy. Heh. Luckily that's personal stuff. The sex was hot (I just don't like submissive Jay anywhere near as much as dominant). The only real "problem" is that you have a few grammatical errors, which I'd be down to help with if you need it.
Keep up the good work. :3
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! What you really made me want to read was her getting back at our delinquent Tom. Prrr.