rate_review Reviews

This is a really sad but amazingly written story. The emotions that Dean has faced make it such a brilliant story to follow. You can't help but feel his pain when you read it.

Great story! As always your writing is excellent. More please!

I know it's a little late to review this but I just found it and got hooked up.
I couldn't stop reading until I was finished with the last chapter.
The way you filled the gaps between the episodes... absolutely genius!
One of the best written fics I've ever read and even though I think I'm a little bit twisted for it your story kind of got me interested in the John/Dean pairing.
How you structured the whole thing, flashbacks, szenes from the orgininal episodes, Dean's and John's inner monologs including the review about their feelings and relationship was bloody brilliant.
The way Sam reacted was also in character, along with his inner conflict when he was possessed.
I liked your ending a lot.
Is there any possibility you'll write a sequel? Maybe about their hunt with John?
Would be interesting character development...

*punches John in the face so hard his nose breaks* Now of course this isn't all John's fault, I have a truck-load of father issues anyway but still *punches John again* there are a few things that got me riled up. Like lying to Sam. Oh yeah and totally screwing AND screwing up your eldest who wanted nothing more then your love.
Ok, feeling calmer now. Point I wanted to make in this is that you showed a side of John which I knew was there and I was grateful it was brought about so well. And Dean? Oh you captured him entirely. It's what Dean would do in those circumstances and you truly showed his love for his family that comes before anything and everything else. Thank you
Aniala

I keep forgetting to look here for updates!

Um.. I almost choked when I John started making horse and cowboy jokes! It was just way too much for me to take!

And yea, you completely turned me on to the idea of Dean dominating John... Why has no one else done it?!?

No! Not my Sam!!!! Couldn't he just love Dean all on his own? Though, I do like the fact that Sam will be able to see the full extent of his powers.. Hopefully, when he and John do have a talk, Sam/Demon will attack him... That would be nice to see! Maybe even give John a taste of his own medicine, if you get my meaning!

So, I completely forgot that this story was being updated, so I was a couple of chapters behind! Forget what I said about John being the Caption of the Winchester ship, he deserves death... And this opinion was formed before being possessed! I can only imagine what's going to happen! Update soon!

You must write more... This is as evil as the finale. Please finish this story....

i love this story!! its soooo hot. especially when dean begs and calls john daddy. mmmm. yeah im sick, so sue me. tho i think you should do a flashback of a time when dean goes willingly to his father. that would be extremely hot. oh geeze. do it, for me please??

i love this story so much its not even funny.i was shocked at how Dean really wanted this but w.e. it was good none the less.anyways keep writing.plz.