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Oh man, I was starting to worry that there would never be any reconciliation between Jase and his Dad... That was a very beautiful chapter. Please write more!

I have been waiting for this to update for so long. Where are you? I'm getting a little antsy over here. Hehe. I love this story and I am SO excited to see what happens next with the house plans and Jason's dad and just EVERYTHING! BTW, I think I e-mailed you forever ago to ask you to continue with this even though you had stopped it for about a year. Am I on drugs or did that actually happen?

Please update soon.

T/J Shipper for LIFE,
Morphine

Will we get anymore?

I was wondering if you are going to continue with this story? I haven't read much Tommy/Jason but I really enjoyed this one and I hope more is on its way soon.

Oh man, what a close call. I hope all the renovations to the house went alright, but somehow I get the feeling there will be something wrong... But then again, I could be wrong. I can't wait for the next chapter... Well, I can, just not very patiently. I check at least twice a day for updates.

Another amazing chapter! I really hope Jason's Dad mellows out about the whole sitch, and stops worrying so much about what people will say and allows himself to just care for Jason like he should.

Another amazing chapter! My heart was wrenching with Jason. I really do hope that Jason's Dad stops being an idiot and stops pushing Jason away...

There is nothing that I would like to see more than a new chapter on this fic. I've followed it since I discovered it. Oh how amazing the Tommy/Jason Pairing is. Makes me relax a bit, knowing there's never going to be any Kim or Kat interference.

Dagmar--

I've been following "More Than Friends And Brothers" since it started some time ago and have eagerly looked forward to each new installment, feeling that in general each piece was better than the last one. After reading the most recent update, "A Friend's Choice", I felt I finally had to WRITE a review instead of merely clicking the "rating" box.

Absolutely fantastic. That's the bottom line. Your writing is so engaging, the story so layered and believable, that when I was reading the first half of the chapter I felt as tense and as tight-stomached as Jason and Tommy must have felt in the story, wondering how it would turn out. (I can't remember the last time I felt that way reading fiction--online or published!) The added wild card of Rocky's sacerdotal vocation was a brilliant (and brave) touch. Not only did it provide some necessary tension to the storyline, but you didn't take any extremist cheats either that so many authors would take in a situation like that. To continue to handle that particular element well will take a great deal of imagination and empathy blended with a healthy dose of reality... but by now I am certain you can handle that.

From the beginning the story has been very well-written, with convincing psychology and authentic human emotion. You have managed that rare accomplishment, staying true to the two main characters' personalities while leading them in directions that MMPR of course never envisaged. In just about every other Jason/Tommy story I've ever happened across, by the time the story was over one or the other character had substantially changed to fit the stereotypical "dominant" or "submissive" personality... which is totally contrary to the dynamic we've always seen at work between Jason and Tommy. You have not fallen into that trap. You've balanced their personalities in the context of developing intimacy and affection, I think, absolutely perfectly, in a way that would almost HAVE to be the way that things would have worked out in "reality".

Well, I've said enough, I think... Again, fantastic job, and please keep it up!

--Blackwolf

I am loving this story. Tommy and Jason are so cute together it makes me so damn jealous!