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for The Proper Care of a First Officer

by mistyfur

schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are my hero. Most Voyager fics on AFF piss me off, and I haven't had time to write recently. This was sexy sexy sexy. I love a dominant Janeway (but not over the top). You might want to go over your spelling though. That's the only real "complaint" I have. Other things are personal. Since I loved Janeway in that episode I would have written her with the cropped hair. And I would have had her use the vibe on him. *laugh*

But seriously. YOU ARE MY HERO for this fic. I hope to see more like it.