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for While the girls are away

by francklyscarlett

person ffoxxy
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...nice chapter to end the night with. Gonna be having 'nice' dreams ;-)
person ffoxxy
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still as nice as the first two times! Mmm...looking forward to their Saturday together.
person ffoxxy
schedule April 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew! I like the revision...especially the suck in the park! Hot chapter to read after a tiring day at work. Glad to see this story back...now for the second part ;-)
person ffoxxy
schedule April 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought for a second that Jean was going to use Alistair instead of her vibrator LOL Mmm...nice lunch, although a little too short ;-) Looking forward to the next chapter. How's Jean going to make it the rest of the day without her panties?