rate_review Reviews

This was excellent. Well written with care to the morality and sensuality of the scene. Sam's inner thoughts are very believable. The gun is an excellent prop - phallic symbol wrapped up in danger and power- and used well, realistically and sensually. The explicitness of their behavior was a turn on for the reader yet remained intensely personal between the characters; the words used and actions taken didn't cheapen the scene for quick thrill. I enjoyed reading this interlude and am glad there is another one. Thank you for writing and posting.

Well, that was certainly one way to deal with it!

You do have a few small typos, so a read-through might not be amiss.

This was a very nice piece - thank you for sharing it! Happy writing!

This is lovely. Actually your set of four stories, which I've been back to read multiple times, are the best Sam/Dean smut I've read in the entirety of both ff.net and aff.net's archives. Don't suppose you'd be interested in a plot bunny that's been nagging at me for a while, but that I've been unable to do anything about because of my inability to successfully write m/m? Much love, and you should definitely write a few more one shots to go with these four at least, ~Sarah

awsome wicked loved it

Fucking HOT!!!!!!!!! I don't know how else to put it. It had me drooling. Write more please!!!

Love ya

guh, *head desk* wow .. that was hot.. never really thought about gun play in quite that way before.. lol.. but freaking hot with our boys.. lol.. would lvoe to see more from you..