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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"She was getting really wet in her clint and felt it in her panties" What the fuck is that supposed to mean? Was Clint Eastwood inside her panties or something?? Since when is she old enough to be able to walk into a Adult Video store and just buy a movie and walk out? I know that this fic is a year old but when I see something this bad, I have say something. I noticed how you said at the beginning of the fic that those under 17 should not read this fic. That's good of you and all, but were you yourself old enough to be on this site when you posted this? It makes one wonder what with all the spelling and logic errors. Hmmm...
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i liked ur story i cant wait to see what matt has in mind
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was great i i have to find out what happens
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was great i i have to find out what happens
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you going to make matt have sex with his *SISTER!!!!!* please don't that would be sick
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOOK! I HAVE PROOF!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was good write more!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Before you go off and rip on other people's stories, maybe you should take a look at your own work because I haven't read anything here that is worth reading again.
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, your style needs some work. Try more description, more eroticism. Still, I give you credit, this is a lot harder than it looks. Work with the lesbian concept, and work on your style.