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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You should really try harder, I'm sure you can do much better than this particular work of fan fiction.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...that sucked and if I didn't know any better i'd think that you wrote that crappy on purpose.
seriously do you read what you write?
seriously do you read what you write?
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so fucking lame!
1: That would never happen in real life
2: Where the Hell does a teen get a dildo?!
3: Clint: What the fuck is a clint?
4: No imagination whatsoever
Last of all, fix the spelling, gramar, and wait about ten years before writing again.
1: That would never happen in real life
2: Where the Hell does a teen get a dildo?!
3: Clint: What the fuck is a clint?
4: No imagination whatsoever
Last of all, fix the spelling, gramar, and wait about ten years before writing again.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a lame story. I'm so glad this got the reviews it deserved so you didn't write another chapter. Please learn how to masturbate yourself before you decide to write again.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!is her bother going to fuck her????????????????????
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry and post next chappy!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should tottally do another chapter b/c this was awesome. I can't believe Matt saw her like that. I cant wiat to see what he's thinking up now.
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
youre sick and cant write, give up.
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not good how old are you anyway like 13.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this really sucks