Well, don't leave me hanging! What happens next?!
First off, I like dark fics but they're fairly hard to find. So I like this story! Don't get me wrong...I feel horrible on Klink's behalf and I dearly hope Hogan or someone else kills Adler. I don't want Klink to die; he's a decent guy. I also hope they can help Klink recover from all this.
Also, moving on to Carter...his innocence is so refreshing. love how everyone else is horrified at what's happening and Carter is just innocently sitting there like "But how is that possible? The General's no girl."
Of course, the next bit with Newkirk's sarcastic self made me snort my coffee! "Well, when a poofter and a fairy love each other very much..." Brilliantly writen, and definitely classic Newkirk.
And after that LeBeau explains everything but Carter's main concern is "Doesn't that hurt?" Like, there's bigger issues to worry about, but that's the bit he's focused on.
And just so you know, the Sergeant of the Guard's name is spelled 'Schultz' not 'Shultz'. Also, there's weird black diamonds in place of a lot of the punctuation marks for some reason.
All in all, this is a great story, keep updating it!