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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's a rather evil epilogue don't you think ;P
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're going to leave it on a cliff hanger? Please - a sequel! Yes, you must write a sequel! I just love C/W.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,
First of all thank you for sending me the mail with the fact that you completed the story. And now for my reaction of the story: You first attempt at the slash scene was a succes! I liked it....the het scene was also very well done. I must admit that the ending of the story was somewhat of a surprise: with Chris accepting the fact that Wyatt forced him the first time (I mean if somebody put a spell on me I would be pissed....it's actually rape isn't it?....taking away the ability to say no.)and allowing the relationship to continue. But in general I liked your writing skills.
Succes with any other stories that you are writing.
Kamadi
First of all thank you for sending me the mail with the fact that you completed the story. And now for my reaction of the story: You first attempt at the slash scene was a succes! I liked it....the het scene was also very well done. I must admit that the ending of the story was somewhat of a surprise: with Chris accepting the fact that Wyatt forced him the first time (I mean if somebody put a spell on me I would be pissed....it's actually rape isn't it?....taking away the ability to say no.)and allowing the relationship to continue. But in general I liked your writing skills.
Succes with any other stories that you are writing.
Kamadi
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i Loveee it please update soon
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,
Is this story on hiatus?? Because that would be a shame...it's really good.
Is this story on hiatus?? Because that would be a shame...it's really good.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay sex! woooooooooooooooot keep it coming, its rare to find good wyatt/chris fanfics around! ^_^
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story idea. I really like the Wyatt being obsessed with Chris thing but the story would be even better if you got a beta.
I couldn't help but notice that your spelling and punctuation are sometimes a little bit off.
Hopefully you're not too angry with me for pointing it out but I thought you'd like a bit of constructive criticism. I always do.
Please continue soon.
I couldn't help but notice that your spelling and punctuation are sometimes a little bit off.
Hopefully you're not too angry with me for pointing it out but I thought you'd like a bit of constructive criticism. I always do.
Please continue soon.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS THE FIRST STORY I READ THAT'S FROM A FANDOM OTHER THEN SMALLVILLE IN A LONG WHILE N I GOTTA SAY
THAT WaASSSSSSSSSSS so hot love the whole chris obssesion thing.
looking foward 2 more
THAT WaASSSSSSSSSSS so hot love the whole chris obssesion thing.
looking foward 2 more
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good! whana reade more about it.. so please hurry up.. =)
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! i remember going through the charmed section a (long) time ago...and there was NO slash. None. Nada. Invisdabull. Yours was the first story I read for this pairing (one that i've been Craving for a while). Would it be quite alright if i worship the ground you walk on?
But Question! is you're use of the word "I'll" as "Il" on purpose, like a trademark thing, a word error or is it just grammar thing? Just kina irked me-- Kneejerk reaction, I twitched. It was funny.
I'd like to actually see you on a better site thouhg. AFF.net's formatting sucks ass. Anywhere else you're posted? Hope you continue on.
=_+ Tsui!
But Question! is you're use of the word "I'll" as "Il" on purpose, like a trademark thing, a word error or is it just grammar thing? Just kina irked me-- Kneejerk reaction, I twitched. It was funny.
I'd like to actually see you on a better site thouhg. AFF.net's formatting sucks ass. Anywhere else you're posted? Hope you continue on.
=_+ Tsui!