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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am truly enjoying this story. I am and will always be a Grissom/Sara fan but this Nick/Sofia thing is pretty good.
Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting.
Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, please continue.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an extremely well written story. The I don't think I've ever seen this pairing before, and the situation is definitely a little unusual for this ficdom. The only think I would warn against is using too many of the typical "romance" phrases and terms. You don't want your pretty original piece to blur into all the others. Try to find your own language to express it. Otherwise, keep up the work, I would like to see where it goes.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww update soon!!! I really like this. it was soo hot at the start!!! :D :D
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, no, you have to continue! They have to get together, they just HAVE to! Aw, man.
Excellent story otherwise. Loved the beginning, of course, and the evolving emotions as the storyline progressed. I think you captured their personalities perfectly, and I can't help wanting a resolution, because their night at the motel was so serene and so obviously abundant of joy, you get the feeling from that little scene that these two make each other happy and should be together. So I really hope you continue and great job!
Excellent story otherwise. Loved the beginning, of course, and the evolving emotions as the storyline progressed. I think you captured their personalities perfectly, and I can't help wanting a resolution, because their night at the motel was so serene and so obviously abundant of joy, you get the feeling from that little scene that these two make each other happy and should be together. So I really hope you continue and great job!