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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was...interesting, but I highly think that Randy being raped will cause him to somewhat hemorrhage and it wouldn't cause a code blue. You used your imagination which is nice but sometimes taking too far makes your story seem trite and hard to follow but overall it was good.
P.S: Just a little constructive criticism
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P.S: Just a little constructive criticism
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
klk