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by DPH

schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this one! Having Lois and Lex is a deadly combo! Please explore further!
person Asha
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry, I don't sign in to review. ^-^ all in all, a good story. Structure is a little simplistic at times, and the descriptions were vaguely awkward, but over-all a good story. Like when you reviewed mine, I don't know the characters, so I can't comment on that. I look forward to more of your stories ^-^ ~Asha