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by carnapepper

person Nacht Kind
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a method of conveying characters that astounds me. The interaction is seamless, from Flack's thoughts, to Danny's wise assing(and, yes, I will use that as a verb). The scene speaks of such familiarity, it brings home, while simultaneously contradicting, the looming cloak of casual that both wrap the exchanges in.

Truly, these(all of your work) deserve far more in depth reviews, but I'm ridiculously tired....and yet still reading.....::hits head on desk::
Nacht