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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad. Nice little one-shot you got there. Makes me wanna check out your other stories. :P The only thing I didn't like about it was the ending; it felt a bit rushed. As did the love scene. Other than that, it was great!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this one too!