rate_review Reviews

Enjoyed this very much. Would like to see more given to some flirtatious play on the run.

I really liked this one!

The idea is very good. Scully jumping on Mulder after a run... SCully jogging without panties... sweet! Hot!
But is too quick! one moment they are running, and a second later he is buried in her!
Details! thoughts! sensations! actions!
Maybe after this quickie they are going for a repeat? with more descriptions? (not only of the sexual act..)

Needs work. You had them in one place one moment, and it suddenly changed without any type of transition. First they're at his front door, then suddenly they're in the apartment?

You need to clarify and get more detailed about the small stuff.

There's a few typos and spelling errors too.

Nice quickie!