rate_review Reviews

I thought this story was fantastic. I stayed up practically all night to finish it. If it was a book I would say that "I couldn't put it down". I loved the mostly first person perspective. It was gut wrenching and I know lots of other people said that they would have preferred the views of serval different characters but I like it the way it is. The solo focus makes it so much more emotional to add other people in would diminish from the internal struggle that Rodney is dealing with. It would make the story more distant and too much like a narrator was relating the aftermath instead of an internal struggle. I hope you post many more stories I am looking forward to readig more from you. (Sorry if this sounded like I was repeating myself over and over I wrote this really late/early in the morning.)

Hi, I really liked your story, it was well written and has a great plot. The interaction between Carson, John, and Rodney wonderfully done. I was also a little disappointed about the lack some of the minor characters. So I was wondering if you had planed on doing a story about what they went through before John and Carson bought them back?

Great idea...i do wanna know it was like they were just 'there' i would like to have more chapters added to tell the perspective of

Lorne
Kaite
John
Elisabeth
Teyal

Excellent well written story...but i was a bit dissapointed with the lack of involvement with the characters such as Lorne, Katie and Laura

wow....just wow that was wonderful, such a long, brillantly thought out story