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I just had to add another comment. After watching him in those lovely light gabardine slacks last night, I've been thinking about it all day... so had to, of course, re-read this awesomely hot chapter of your "Volcada" story.

I love so much in here, but this line "The sensation, this taste of the promise of him inside her for the first time was almost more than she could bear." whew... ultra-hot! Plasma-scorching hot! (That's mighty hot.) As before, looking forward to more more more!!! Whew, Pam's such a lucky gal!

This is one of those times that words just seem to fall short in reviewing a segment like this. All I can say is I was most definitely feeling it, whew. Your words, as always, are poetry-turned-prose, and your descriptions of the two characters were exquisite, making me feel like I was in Pam's very lucky shoes. Oh my. Finding this first thing in the morning was a real treasure, and I dragged it out, reading piece by piece, savoring the entire experience. And you know how I await every story posted from you! That long, drawn-out process makes it that much sweeter. And as you know, I can't WAIT till the next installment in this most excellent Bill/Pam series! Whoo!