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by HunterJumper1106

person Zoe
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, Sofia is packin' up her furniture the dark side! She might had an apartment there already, with funky wallpaper and the stench of cigarettes. Gil did not look like he was havin' a fun time there either. after-math of this story might turn into some twistes, violent love triangle or something. Anywho, great story, go you.
person Zoe
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, Sofia is packin' up her furniture and movin to the dark side! She might had an apartment there already, with funky wallpaper and the stench of cigarettes. Gil did not look like he was havin' a fun time there either. after-math of this story might turn into some twistes, violent love triangle or something. Anywho, great story, go you.
person Crystal
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was really, really good. I thought Sofia was Sara...
Anyways, *****. Love!
~CS~
person mrs. tingles
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you fooled us beautifully!

so well written..it flows, its interesting..i loved it!
person Andy
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I didn't see that end coming... Really well-written, lovely phrased. You got me, from the beginning to the end. Good job.

Andy
person kcmddr
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME! not much more fits than that word. Well done !